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BAD "John
graduated from Syracuse University in 1987 with a major in
Narcoleptic Cryosynthesis then went on to study Hypothyodrism at
Cornell, he is the most wonderful person in the world and loves
people who are cheerful. He has worked in countries all over the
world but would someday like to study Hypocrithiumologistics on
his own."
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GOOD
"John sitting on a cruise ship,
sunset behind him, sipping an umbrella drink and reading a
medical book titled "Hypocrithiumologistics" |
| Reason:
no action, no scene, no tangible information that could be used
as a snapshot representing the subject. |
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Reason:
action, specific setting, to the point, gives artist a visual
snapshot of subject. |
